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Creative firm: Brand Engine, Sausalito, CA
Client: SkylarHaley
Industry: Food and Beverage
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 | “The fruit illustrations used in this series are hyperreal
in their juicy perfection. Matching them with the
simplistic circle and unadorned lettering gives the series a
clean, modern feeling without losing any tastiness. My only
critique is a minor one: it looks as if the path around the fruit
is slightly off, leaving a white line around some of the fruit.” |
 | “A realistic portrayal of the fruit, suggesting a natural source
for the juice—something a more graphic and therefore,
perhaps more artificial portrayal would not communicate.” |
 | “A nice mix of traditional and contemporary styles are
at play. The classically rendered fruit is held in place with
a timeless circular shape with a bright, modern green halo.
It is anchored by a modern lowercase sans serif font.” |
 | “There is something slightly old-fashioned about this
rendering style. It communicates familarity and
trustworthiness—real added value in a mark of any kind.
The letterforms are a Humanist sans serif: type based on
handwritten shapes that have subtle thicks and thins and
non-geometric curves. This type choice furthers
the friendly tone.” |
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Creative firm: Tokyo Farm, Los Angeles, CA
Client: Milk Boutique
Industry: Retail, Fashion
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 | “The childlike simplicity of this logo is created by a few, quite
refined choices, allowing the letters to bleed out of the
puddle shape and adding a flower that is just slightly
irregular. My only tweak would be increasing the weight of
the top stroke of the ‘k.’ It’s a bit thin where it leaves
the puddle.” |
 | “Flowing letterforms, fresh colors—this is a playful,
summery logo. That it’s for a fashion boutique and not milk
just adds to the interest. The execution is polished and
refined, and the curves and the way they join the type are
almost flawlessly executed.” |
 | “Making ‘milk’ look liquid requires a deft touch where the
letters join the perimeter of the pool so neither dominates
the other. The inside of the ‘m’ and the top of the ‘k’ are
nearly right but curve off a bit too quickly, giving the light
blue milk priority over the letterforms.” |
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Creative firm: Braue: Strategic Brand Design, Bremerhaven, Germany
Client: Gebrüder Wollenhaupt
Industry: Tea Trading Company
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 | “Everything is working splendidly here; even the drop
shadows are treated with a professional touch. The choice
of condensed serif mixed with Copperplate evokes a classic
richness perfect for a line of tea. Even the arched type is well
handled and spaced. Bravo!” |
 | “Elegantly balanced execution, great color combination, and
a good example of a logo that DOESN’T fall foul of the ‘drop
shadow more forward in the mix than the letters
casting it’ rule.” |
 | “Timeless in its classic handling of form and counterform,
particularly the generous space between the type’s
perimeter and the inside of the border.” |
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Creative firm: Korn Design, Boston, MA
Client: Zigo Take Out Food
Industry: Restaurant
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 | “Oh so close! I like the combination of photographic
elements here, but the logo looks like it was stuck on later.
If the logo had been printed onto the plate and THEN
photographed so there was a little shine and distortion of
the letters as they curved up, this logo would go from pretty
good to totally great.” |
 | “Plate and tablecloth indicate this take-out food company
serves more upmarket grub than your average take-away.” |
 | “An actual photo rather than a simplified rendering is a
refreshing approach. Note the precise bisection of the plate
and ‘zigo’ by the background: that is a purposeful
relationship.” |
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Creative firm: Storm Corporate Design, Auckland, New Zealand
Client: Info Technologies
Industry: IT
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 | “It’s amazing how well this reads considering how much is
missing. A software logo is the perfect place to play with
geometric abstractions and missing pieces. The designer
did a nice job of moving and removing elements to create
a feeling of kinetic motion. My only issue is the curve in the
‘S’—it needs to be smoothed out just a touch.” |
 | “This logo plays some interesting games with positive and
negative space. The ‘E’ and ‘Q’ are formed from the same
shape, one with the bar dropped. However, there are some
areas that, because they’ve been derived from purely
geometric forms, need finessing. For example, the bend in
the middle of the ‘S’ needs smoothing out—getting this part
of this letter to look elegant and beautiful is one of the
hardest elements of font design.” |
 | “Sequel is an Indian software developer, so the stark on/off
feeling of the letterforms is a thoughtful interpretation of a
computer’s binary language.” |
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Creative firm: Glitschka Studios, Salem, OR
Client: Leap Frog/Fly. Leap Frog makes a computerized
pen called ‘Fly.’ This was a redesign
for that brand’s logo mark.
Industry: Educational Toys
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 | “This is a great fly icon—simple and strong. The use of
repetitive angles gives it a slightly aggressive feeling that
isn’t reflected in the type. I think a few adjustments to the
letterforms of the word ‘FLY’ to create some resonant
angles would improve this logo.” |
 | “A computerized fly, stylishly and simply executed. This logo
has the bold simplicity of the best marks without any loss of
character—it’s iconic and memorable.
“Typographically, the ‘F’ of ‘FLY’ is slightly too wide, and the
decending tail on the ‘Y’ could be lifted to the baseline for
even more chunky geometric symmetry. The stroke
on the ‘Y’ that sits on the baseline is too thin.” |
 | “The lettering has distinctive stroke endings. The fly does
not, though its wing shapes are ‘right.’ Rework the fly to
further absorb the best part of the type for design unity.” |
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Creative firm: TOKY Branding + Design, St. Louis, MO
Client: Elizabeth Fox Handbags
Industry: Fashion
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 | “This border could be a piece of jewelry, it’s so great. It’s clear
that time was taken—its imperfections are perfectly charming.
I wish the primary type had some of the same character.
It feels a bit light and clean. I want the type to be printed
letterpress, or salvaged from some other already-printed
source and then rescanned to give it the same feeling of
craft as the border.” |
 | “A good balance of line weights. The logo uses a serif and
a sans, and careful spacing gives an even visual ‘color’ and
coherence with the border.” |
 | “Although this would be a nightmare to reproduce at smaller
sizes, you can certainly appreciate the details when closely
inspected. The elegant border delivers well on the handcrafted
theme, and the designer was considerate to use a
similar approach for his border.
“The symmetrical shape could very well be a computer
shape that was simply inverted, but it appears here to be
hand drawn. A classic typeface has been selected for the
name, which is then solidly anchored by a more modern
surrounding type.” |
 | “Though there is certainly nothing wrong with the type, the
star here is the fanciful border. The subtly boldened north,
south, east, and west makes it look alive. It is almost organic.” |
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Creative firm: TOKY Branding + Design, St. Louis, MO
Client: Elizabeth Fox Handbags
Industry: Fashion
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 | “The 60s op-art feeling of this mark is right on target. The
number ‘2’ is fabulous. I wish the lettering had been given
some of the same attention to detail. It doesn’t add anything
of interest.” |
 | “Using variations on a tight grid is a useful way to achieve
design cohesion. Here, the ‘o’ and the ‘2’ are constructed
from joined dots, indicating connections between
individuals.” |
 | “This designer clearly enjoys playing with form. Tasty figure
‘2.’ Love that the colors have been reversed in the type below.
My eyes want to see a relationship between the letterforms
at the bottom and the gray dots of the artwork. Maybe a
nine-unit grid could have been used?” |
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Excerpted with permission from Really Good Logos Explained by Margo Chase, Rian Hughes, Ron Miriello, Alex White. Copyright © 2008 (Rockport Publishers). |
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